Reviews for You Know Nothing Of Hell
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Some powerful imagery here, and the emphasis really helped draw in focus to 'my' and 'feel', almost like the person the speaker is talking to doesn't realise them and so they have to be drawn to the words. I loved the last two lines very clever and powerful. I think this is certainly a powerful piece that really draws you in with an iron grip. Great piece, very strong and certainly made my heart splinter.
tolerate chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Oh God, as usual, this was strong and heartbreaking. It felt such a heavy feeling in my chest like it's weighing down on me. Fantastic poem.
SerenityofSummer chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Wow! This had a massive impact on me as I read this. It's powerfully written and I love how you put emphasis on the words 'my' and 'feel'. This is brilliant. Love, love, love this.