|Reviews for Fighting the all-powerful Denis|
| Cinnamon Shards chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
To do what? I'm very interested to find out! :D
I like the way you chose to introduce your characters. We already know quite a bit about them, but you've shown us rather than telling us. Bravo! The only big hiccup I found was here;
"Scott Caslo, one of Nikita's loyal friends, was sleeping."
Instead of telling us that he's her loyal friend, why not show us? Maybe have Nikita smile and feel a little guilty because Scott had been up late helping her study for History? Or something like that anyway -you know him better than I do! :)
Keep writing kitten -you've got a great start here.