I liked the poem
And I can relate to everything you said, so.

I enjoyed it! Short, witty, fun! (Also, advice, don't ward people off in your summaries. Flamers can go f themselves, but they'll always be there.) I liked the flow of it at the beginning. The story is very relatable and builds confidence by establishing an independence of spirit while simultaneously cutting confidence down by isolating yourself to the point of extreme. Everything flowed pretty well until "who yearns to go awry" and "that could be a bit fun"- the words were a bit cramped into place- maybe shorten down a bit with phrases like "kinda" that you used before. All in all good work! Everyone feels down at times; but art lifts the spirit up ;)