Reviews for Monster
A. Nonymous1234 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Wow... Just, wow. I'm not one to read poetry, so I really can't lend much help here, sorry! All I can really say is wow. The ending... just blew me away. Good job!
forgottenwords7 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Very nice imagery you've created here, I really liked the beginning stanza too, it drew me into the poem. Brilliant :)
Kay Iscah chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
You have no idea how refreshing it is to read a poem that actually rhymes and has tempo.

First stanza and a half is perfect.

After that the imagery starts jumping around and loses consistency. I get an idea of misplaced blame, but the message/story of the poem isn't quite clear.

But that first stanza is honestly strong enough to stand on it's own.