Reviews for The Fear
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I love this poem because fear is something we all have; I remember hearing this quote: "Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear." Ambrose Redmoon, which I think is befitting here. Sometimes we have to confront the shadows, and the monsters under our beds, because if we didn't we wouldn't be as strong as we are now, in my opinion. I love the imagery. But for me, I didn't think "Theirs are the shadows" flowed well as a line; in my opinion, I think "They are the shadows" flows better, but that's a small, insignificant, suggestion which does not detract from the piece. I really enjoyed this piece.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I loved the emphasis on BUMP and your descriptions as always were spectacular!
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Hehe, this is nice. I like the example you gave (the BUMP! thing).