|Reviews for Last Rebellion of a Leper|
| Indigo Ziona chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Wow. Short yet so vivid. I like "air whistles through her throat" particularly. I was a little confused at who the "I" figure was? I thought the narrator was a member of Eve's family and not a leper, then was confused by "our vocal cords" later. The tenses also seem a little mixed between past and present, think that's just a proof reading thing though.
I like this story a lot, the way that it subverts the ideas about saving and healing.
| Lil'Conqueror chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
That was intense. :l But I loved it, nonetheless.