Reviews for Passing Through
jenxrawr chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
there should be a space between endless and cycle in the second line. also i am unsure if you are making a reference to my favorite movie... but if you did not know, Blue Valentine is an amazing movie. I personally feel like sacrificing is giving your everything, putting it all out there on the line, with no guarantee. haha, just something I would like to share. but good poem, i love the ending.