Reviews for Enamoured
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Lovely imagery, very clever, especially the 'falling' aspects - it made me think of someone who kept getting up just to trip all over again. It makes me think of 'puppy love' and how sometimes it's not as innocent as it seems. I did notice something slightly off, in my opinion, in stanza seven; "I'd not change a single thing" to me didn't flow as so maybe I would use "I would" instead of "I'd" and I would put a comma between the two 'me' (s) on that. But they're just tiny suggestions but apart from that a really good piece, well done.
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
You mentioned 'fell' and 'dropped' so the poem felt like falling from the skies to some unknown ground. I liked the phrase 'So hard my feet missed the ground'. It's unique. Your ending was a good one and I liked the poem. If I were 2 years younger, I would have been able to relate to this. I'm not in love now, but your poem brings back nostalgia.