Reviews for Rise To Supremacy
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
This is a very empowering poem, very positive and makes me think of Katniss and Peeta (Hunger Games Reference (Sorry)) and how they were united in the end. Really clever and strong imagery, something that demands no less then to sit up straight and appreciate it. I like the last italicised line, it makes me think that no matter how strong you are on the outside - you can still have insecurities. I did notice something that, to me, didn't flow well with the piece: "Alone we stand alone" to me would work better as "We stand alone". But it's just my opinion. Brilliant piece.
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
It makes me feel so united with someone. A simple and lovely poem.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This is really good - I like it a lot! Always be positive and write on.

Anna :)