Reviews for Drowning
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I've never thought drowning is a peaceful way to die; in fact what an awful way to die! Gasping for air while the sea drags you down, nope that is not the way I would want to go. I really like the irony coming through here and how doubtful the speaker is about how peaceful it is and as for the imagery it's beautiful. Great piece! :)
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Mhmmm, I like this. I still think drowning is a peaceful way to die, though.
True Talker chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This makes me think.