|Reviews for Jeweled Spirits|
| Access Pending chapter 9 . 12/9/2013
"The same golden color now plagued with the touch of darkness"...
I swear, that last line gave me chills. o.o
| Access Pending chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
*Smirks* somebody's got a biting ki nk!
| Access Pending chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I now have the sudden urge to read more if only to figure out what it means that Ame's gem is Onyx...
| Miscellaneous chapter 22 . 12/8/2013
I normally come here for short stories and poems... But you, dear friend, have peeked my interest. Expect more reviews from me in the future.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
well some ones been whatchin mew mews
| InSaNiTy-of-reality chapter 22 . 3/25/2013
This was a really cute story! I absolutely loved it X3
And i was quite happy with the sexytimes between Kumo and Ame ;) those two just fit together perfectly
| Kilian Grey chapter 22 . 3/5/2013
Well, here I am at the end of your little story and I can say that I was entertained. Very little irked me, like the descriptions of their outfits they change into but, despite minor spelling errors and some punctuation problems you write a likable tale. Thanks for posting it.
| Kilian Grey chapter 16 . 3/5/2013
| Kilian Grey chapter 14 . 3/5/2013
You surprised me, I really didn't see Kumo being the protective type. Surprise is good.
| Kilian Grey chapter 13 . 3/5/2013
Aww, love, hate relationships are always so difficult.
| Kilian Grey chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
Good dream sequence but the lack of a *** 'tell' makes it confusing, even if it is in italics.
Spelling tip: 'lose or losing' is something that is lost; 'loose or loosing' is something that doesn't fit as in too big.
| Kilian Grey chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
Semi-long hair? How about 'past his ears', 'shoulder length' or any other description.
Kumo is getting really irritating, I like it.
| Kilian Grey chapter 5 . 3/5/2013
| Kilian Grey chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
| Kilian Grey chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
I liked the character portrayal but have a few suggestions.
The narrative was too quick and too detailed through the whole changing scene (like how can he see his own forehead?) Slow it down a bit even though the threat and his urgency to act was immediate. The description of his appearance would have been better after the the fight, it wouldn't have felt so rushed.