Reviews for In the night
jero246 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
great haiku
Archia chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I really liked these three haikus. I didn't think you need to state the numbers, I thought it would work better just as one straight poem because then it's not read without the interruptions. But it doesn't really matter. There's just one thing that I can't get my mind around "That has always been my dream/ Ever since today." How can something of always been their dream, if it's only been their dream for that one day? It's a bit contradictory and doesn't really work, but it's probably just me that gets antsy about stuff like that. Apart from those things, these were very good. They so nicely described the stars in different ways and made them seem so beautiful.