Reviews for Within Tomorrow Lies Our Yesterdays
Annarina chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I loooove the structure of this, and all of the imagery that you've used too, simply wonderful :) xx
Tepid Waters chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
"We don't know how to opt out." This rings so frighteningly true that I would believe you if you told me you lived inside my brain on weekends. I really really love this. I think you've worked this theme perfectly and couldn't have produced a more honest and effective response.
Winnie-Kay chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
This was beautiful! I loved the easy flow of the rhythm and light rhyme, and the effect created by the repeated "We don't know". The imagery was really lovely too, in the first stanza especially and I thought that idea of a conveyor belt was really smart! There is so much truth in this poem it's ingenious!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
This had the feel of a song, I loved the repetition created by the 'We don't know...' I also loved the situations you painted by each scene you described. A really great piece. You should be proud :-D
Great job as always!