Reviews for Document Fifteen Point Eight
rust phoenix chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
I really like the last line of this.
rust phoenix chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
I like how you use capitals in this piece. They really fit the voice/tone.

Do you listen to Marina and the Diamonds? This kind of reminds me of her song "How To Be A Heartbreaker"
rust phoenix chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
"weighing me up and up and up" I love this phrase. And I can really relate to the emotion in this.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I think this is my favourite of the things you've written. Very honest and relatable.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This has some points that prick up my attention, even
if it doesn't really answer any questions. But I don't
think it's actually a biography. More like a flow of
unrelated but interesting ideas.