Reviews for Valentine
Twinkie216 chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
Oh. Wow. This story just took a huge twist. I'm about 200% sure it was for the better! Amazing! I want to read more! I think this is amazing. I think the chapters are a little short, but they aren't too short. Does that make sense?

Either way, update soon!
Twinkie216 chapter 4 . 5/30/2013
LOL. I loved the ending. That's funny.

Cute! A "date".
Twinkie216 chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
Aw. As rushed as their relationship feels, it can sometimes be like that. Rushed. And then there's the deeper feelings with her thinking she found someone that understands her. I like it. Very unique.

I like Aiden. He's truely something.
Twinkie216 chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
Hm. I think the tense is a little strange, but I like the plot. I REALLY like what you have going here.
But I think that the style of your writing it a little too direct. Readers would have known that the rock woke her up if another one was thrown at the window.

I love how you sum up the chapters though. That makes me smile, and desperate to read the next chapter.
Twinkie216 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Well interesting start. I like this. It keeps me interested the whole time I'm reading. Though, I did notice some grammical errors. They weren't major and are easy to pass over.
Reiz16 chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
It appears that the story stops here, and I was wondering what happened.
Reiz16 chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
I'm wondering what's going to happen next.
Reiz16 chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Mothers like that are terrible.
Reiz16 chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
I laughed when she tried to get out of gym class.
Reiz16 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Ah, the start of a crush.