|Reviews for The Areihi Chronicles: Wings of Thought|
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/20/2013
Wow. Great concept.
I think just a little more background on the main character would help. Just enough to understand why she is different (why he sees the potential in her) and how they both ended up where they are on the deserted planet.
Really fantastic beginning to a story.
Keep up the good work.
| draconic skysong chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
I have no problem understanding confusing writing, but maybe that's because my writing itself is confusing. I can't wait to see what happens next! squeep squeep!
| draconic skysong chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
OOO yai nice start! i'm gona go read the other chapters now! squeep squeep