Reviews for Snow Angel
jenxrawr chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
the ending of this just seems so tragic to me and the way you play with your words and the imagery you create for this is beautiful. this is so good.
electrical moon chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This is a really beautiful poem. You have lovely ideas that are very well expressed with the imagery. The one thing I might work on would be the rhythm, as it's a little choppy in some places. This is a wonderful piece!
Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
You have some fantastic imagery in this poetry, e.g. "black like mascara" and "Pumping ice water through broken pipelines". Yours is a strong, vivid narrative voice and I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.

I only noticed one mistake in the poem, which was here.

"Filled with my warth for your return"

I think you meant "warmth".

Anyway, keep up the good work. :)