Reviews for The Smile I Sold
CurlyGurl chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Amazing. Beautiful. I love it. It flows quite nicely and is relatable.
Ijustknowit13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Snaaap. Wow! This is actually one of my fav poetries, I can actually relate :) The words described here can't be any better!
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
First of all, hi! Its been a while! This piece speaks so much! Ooh I am so glad I logged on to read! Title is just...awesome (cant think of another word but I guess it works) This piece is amazing. It projects so vividly all the sacrifices people make just to fit in with people who don't even care about you. You better not be doing this yourself! I'll get on a plane and slap you if you do that! :D jk but seriously, the words chosen describe the situation perfectly. Quite a pleasant read, as always.

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
fairytopia27 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I understand exactly how you feel. This was a very well-written poem. It felt somewhat drawn out. A personal note: Someone should never try to be someone they're not just to impress a guy, if that guy really liked you, he would like YOU for YOU. This world we live in is shallow and cold.