|Reviews for Alien|
| Semi-Tortured Artist chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
I love the flow of this poem, the lines seem as smooth as a river! Excellent work!
| iamnolongerusingthisaccount chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
I like your imagery except for the "Lips like pink clouds at 5am" I feel like it disrupts the flow of the rest of the poem. Overall though I liked the story.