Reviews for 報 щ N ед O р 奨 о N ст E ь 金 (None Bounty Bounty) |
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eenraptured chapter 9 . 6/24/2013 Hahaha, awww, so kawaii! |
eenraptured chapter 8 . 5/27/2013 I can't keep all these names straight! And where's Kaya?! I misssssss herrrrrrr |
eenraptured chapter 4 . 5/27/2013 YAY! You write big paragraphs... |
eenraptured chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 Plot! Pleeeeeeease? |
eenraptured chapter 2 . 5/27/2013 At first Kaya was a boy...then a girl...and I like it! See some places that need editing, though... |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/9/2013 lol, it took me a while to figure out who Toushio was (terrible at names here :D ), but I finally got it and things clicked. :) Now, back to the story! Yes, you're right, it WAS a successful chapter. The only thing I'd say is if you made them longer(so I can read more!), but saying that, you're short chapters help make your point that the story'd in more than one view point. All in all, though? Fantastic, duh! |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/8/2013 3hope the white dragon comes soon! |
Bovinne chapter 6 . 4/5/2013 Nope! The end's fine; it's meant to be Red from chapter 3, right? (Don't want to make assumptions here, but... :D) 'If' it is, you're doing a fantastic job! I personally think mysterious is better, make the reader think! ;) Good job and keep 'em coming! ... I'd gobble it all up if you'd let me! OM NOM NOM! (Hehe, my friend make me post that XD!) |
Bovinne chapter 5 . 3/31/2013 I fell in love with Finny instantly. He's lazy(somewhat ;P), he wears combat boots and glasses, my two favourite accessories, AND has abusive power D! Keep on posting! |
I3MoMo chapter 4 . 3/26/2013 omg i wonder whos gonna meet up next! maybe the violinist and The White Dragon 33 |
Bovinne chapter 4 . 3/26/2013 Oooh, I see the bunnies FINALLY came together ;) ! I'm glad, though. It's super amazing, keep going! |
I3MoMo chapter 3 . 3/25/2013 The white dragon is my fa! |
I3MoMo chapter 1 . 3/22/2013 DuDe! \o/ whats taking so long im like in love with this story lol u got readers to satisfy T.T i wanna read more but there is no more T.T |
Bovinne chapter 2 . 3/9/2013 Na, it's good. I would've liked the first chapter and this one to relate, but then again you could have something planned(or plan something) for later on. But, all in all, I liked it. Please write more! w |