Reviews for Money In My Pocket |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So Cole failed to get laid by Sleazy? I think Rhodey should ask for fifty dollars every time from now on. His blowjob skills must have improved in the last few weeks, so its only fair that he ups his price :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sucking a dick does not remind he is doing it to a guy, but looking at the guy's adam's apple does. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brilliant. Jack, Rhodey (and Cole) are unique characters and I'd love to read more. I enjoyed reading this a lot, I'm in a good mood now. :) If there will be more, I really look forward to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL lots of very funny lines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You want my honest opinion? I gotta wonder if you can even handle the truth, my friend. But seriously, it's really good. Crude, just how I like 'em. So you've now got my full attention and I can't wait to see what you do next. And yeah, I love how the main character has no shame at all for suddenly becoming a prostitute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally love it. Hope you continue. And you should put Slash or MXM in the summary so that the story can be easily found by interested readers. |