Reviews for Money In My Pocket
nonaccount chapter 10 . 6/30/2014
Like everything else, their pillow talk is amusing.
nonaccount chapter 9 . 6/30/2014
Huh. I just assumed that FaceBook "Christine" was actually Jack Casey. I still think she's a double agent, though. Of course, he kissed Jack. ;)
nonaccount chapter 6 . 6/30/2014
I love how clueless Rhodey is, "I am beyond confused, it's not even funny." YES, it is. :)
nonaccount chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Poor, poor Rhodey - the girl he has a crush on thinks he's dating a guy. So sad. So many amusing parts in this story like this, "[...] I will take convenience where it comes. Quite literally, I'm afraid."
I wonder what's stopping Jack from talking?
nonaccount chapter 2 . 6/30/2014
I continue to love. Specifically, these lines, "Mom's going to tear into me - with words." Unexpected and true.
nonaccount chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Wow. I LOVE this. I wish there was a little more character and scene description, but I have a pretty good imagination. I can't wait to read more. Thanks! :)
rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 18 . 3/15/2014
From the begining up until the very end, I've loved this story more than words. It was hilarious, an surprisingly deep at times with memorials characters. I look forward to reading more from you!
Maz chapter 18 . 2/5/2014
Really enjoyed reading your story! Jack and Rhodey are so friggin cute! Hope you write more :)
BirdLawSpec chapter 7 . 1/30/2014
Oh my! This story is ridiculously hilarious! I'm oh so completely hooked. I am laughing so hard my neighbor just banged on the wall, in order to shut me up..oops! No bull!
RueRue1396 chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
i don't know why the last lines made me laugh maybe because of Rhodey's voice i hope the rest of this is as good as this chapter
Zhekel chapter 18 . 11/24/2013
I'll sum this story in one word; breathtaking.

I just love, love, looove all the characters! They're all so unique, wonderful and everyone had their definite quirks that got one actually paying attention to it; especially with Rhodey's narrative, that is just simply beautiful by the way, despite all vulgar vocabulary.

I just love Rhodey's character. He became a favourite of mine not only because he's the protagonist, but his character is, as I totally agree with Jack; just simply cute and adorable! He's got this tough-guy thing going on and yet he has these pure, innocent sides of him that are just so, so hnnng and I just marvel at those things! Like his thought process with Christine, like, d'awww... And I think my heart died a little at the scene where he wanted forgiveness from Cole. So heartwarming.

All in all, I love your story to bits! You have a wonderful writing (I wish I could write like that, ffff) and well.. I have no words to describe how much I appreciate your awesome by posting this up. Like, seriously. I'll just try not to die by all gushiness I feel right now.

Thanks for a superb, awesome read! Expect to find me lurking in your gallery!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I can't take this fiction seriously with that avatar staring back at me. s2s.
Pantu chapter 18 . 11/13/2013
One shots would be fun, I'd definitly read them, I shall follow on the off chance you still plan to do them.
Thanks for sharing your work and making my day a bit brighter with this yarn :)
Pantu chapter 10 . 11/13/2013
You're not shit at writing smut.
Not at all.
Not even slightly.
In fact, go have a cookie ;)
Pantu chapter 6 . 11/13/2013
Am I a lurker if I don't review every chapter? I know it makes me a hypocrite, because I like multiple reviews, but I also don't want to appear like a stalker... ah well. Probably too late after that. So, continuing the theme then; people who follow/favourite and don't review - grr is all I shall say on the matter.
Oh wait, I'm suposed to be reviewing not ranting ;)
I'm still loving this. This scene was sexy and fun, and "Is that erection for me?" - hilarious - who doesn't love a guy in denial? Poor Rhodey, bless his confused teenage hormones. But aside from my love of reluctant romance(I use that term loosly), nice work getting round the in denial narator with that comment. I know you said you wrote this in one go, but it doesn't feel rushed or patchy.
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