This is brilliantly hilarious.
I love the little interjections of oberservations on life. Also nice use of short sentances to get Rhodey's personality across too :)

That is a entertaining opener and a half. I like Rhodey's voice, kind of simple but in a nice to the point kind of way, and very amusing - then again I like dry humour so that probably helps. Nehoo, I'm looking forward to the rest :)
-Pantu

hilarious and such a fun read. the narrator has such personality and kept me engaged from start to finish both times I read this story.

Thanks!

I loved this so incredibly much. Rhodey's such a simple but refreshing character... honest, blunt, an asshole (totally a character quirk.) and god, were there some hot moments. Also I really like that Jack has a lisp because those things can be sexy as hell and it was just fun to imagine all his S's as th's.

I enjoyed this story a lot :3. And uh. Yeah.

Oh my god I love this! I've been looking for something new to read, and this was perfect. It made me laugh and, "aww" so many times. This was wonderful, lovely work. c:

I love the sex scene its so them and really cute at the same time, hot mess they are, you wrote the perfect sex scene my friend with no over the top moaning like “Unnnghh oh Rhodney moree yeessss Ah ahh AHHHHH!“ or any other kind of cliche shaz there are these days so yep YOU ARE THE BEST PORN SEX DIRECTOR EVER!

I love that it ends at how it start that was amazing that you do it and a really unexpected a twist good was really an amazing character a little bit cliche but casey was so unexpected in a way I never thought he was the first one to be in was pretty cool and amazing friend I want one like her she reminds me of a movie where there is this chinnese girl that have a daughter and she do everything to bring her to the U. Henry I believe you use him perfectly not the cliche way I like that is when one character start going out with this supportive to make the other I would love to see those one shots you say.

I enjoyed this story WAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY more than is humanly possible, I'm almost sure. After every single chapter, I exclaimed aloud (to myself) "No, seriously- this is the best story EVER!". Myself didn't reply, but I'm sure it felt the same. Seriously, my face hurts from grinning so hard. I haven't been so thoroughly entertained by a story in a long time.

I absolutely loved this story! :) And I loved how it finished in the way it started as well, but it still felt different, if that makes sense. And Oh my god, those two are so adorably cute! I definitely would be interested in reading some one-shots as I love this couple! :D

This is so silly it's fun. I can't stop reading it and laughing. What an entertaining way to spend my Sunday.

Loved this story. I'd love to read more about these two. I like your idea. I'll check your stories to see if there's any up there. Thanks for a great read.

Awesome story! One-shots would be good. I like that idea. This was a really fun story to read. RhodeyxJack Casey.

I liked the ending a lot. Letting it end just the way it started was a good idea and I would love to read little one shots about Jack and Rhodey in the future. I enjoyed reading the story very much and I think Rhodey and Jack Casey are special characters. Thank you for publishing this! :)

I would love to have one-shots about them! I really love these characters and want to see more of them.