Reviews for Money In My Pocket
marginal-utility chapter 17 . 4/7/2013
Teenage many times do they get horny in one day? ::)
Midnights Scream chapter 17 . 4/7/2013
awhhhh. they're so insanely adorable. I wonder how the parents will take it. great job!
Midnights Scream chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
Yay Rhodey is forgiven and there was sex! I actually didn't expect him to pull out a vibrator, but it was a good surprise and I love him. they're a weird yet amazing couple. great job...and NOOOOOOOOOO I don't want only two chapters. I wants more. :P
marginal-utility chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
Eh heh, Jack is one kinky little bastard ;D
Just like one should never say 'Bite me' to a vampire, they should not say 'Fuck you' to Jack Casey!
Seems to me Rhodey never thought of him as 'Jack Casey' in this whole chapter!
Dorchise chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
Love this!
Midnights Scream chapter 15 . 4/6/2013
*snicker* apparently Rhodey is kick ass at earning forgiveness thank god. Hopefully Jack Casey will be just as easy to be forgiving. great job!
ForeverWasteAway chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I like this a lot so far. The main character doesn't give a shit and I love that. Definitely subscribing :)
marginal-utility chapter 15 . 4/6/2013
He really freaked Cole out. Kind of sounded like my obsessive best friend. And bumping uglies? :D :D Couldn't he find anything better to say? LOL
Tobi Is A Girl's Name chapter 15 . 4/6/2013
Ah, Rhodey's making nice with everyone! Now, kiss and make-out (er, up, kiss and make-up) with Jack!
Midnights Scream chapter 14 . 4/5/2013
I still like Rhodey still needs to get his chance to explain, but Christine has a point. great job and no not exciting it's about to end. I love reading these updates and once it ends I can't read anymore.
Does it matter chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
well, katie potatie this is going great, keep up the good work. your awesome beta reader.
marginal-utility chapter 14 . 4/5/2013
Rhodey's family can't possibly freak out over his tasting the rainbow, His sister's gay! He should just tell them.
Tobi Is A Girl's Name chapter 14 . 4/5/2013
The drama, c'mon, Rhodey, let Jack fuck yer brains out! Geez, this poor kid is so turned around and confused . . . I feel for him, really.
wallawallabingbang chapter 13 . 4/5/2013
i really like how this has turned out i was kind of iffy on the whole 20 bucks for whatever thing they had goin cause it was hilarious at first then it was just kind of sad how Rhodey kept goin back to him so now i hope this is a long story
Midnights Scream chapter 13 . 4/4/2013
Ugh, Rhodey why does your life suck so much? Oh the other hand, people need to shut the fuck up and just listen to him. He's obviously has stuff and apologies to say. great job!
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