Reviews for Problems
NoBetterWordsthanYourOwn chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Sad poem, but written well (Except the 7th line confused me). Good job otherwise.

'Sooner or later'
'You would never understand'
'I don't want you to understand'
Sally Wolf chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
How about "Are You Dating?" I like the emotion in this very sad.
Watercatcher7984 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
I love this poem! Do u mind me asking if you are of the female gender?
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Well, if you don't want them to know why you hate the dating subject, and yet you also do, I think you're in a rut. And honestly, if you think the friendship(s) will end, they will - you have to picture yourself the way you want to be, happy with friends, and truly, truly believe in it, and then it will happen. It's been proven over and over again. You just need to move on from all of the people who have hurt you and be happy with people you really think you could potentially be happy with, either platonically or romantically. That's the only way you'll be happy.

As for a title, try this: "Dying Rose."