Reviews for Callum: Rainstorm Roses: February 2013
Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
As an introduction, I think it works really well. Would love to see more. Although it's mostly description, it's stronger than most of your other description-based openings. It really draws the reader in, especially as it's grounded in the actions of the characters rather than just their surroundings. Good job.