Reviews for Goodbye, My love
Gingerembre chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Thats really good, I like the rhyming scheme you used :)
jesusfreakauthorgirl17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
All I can think to say is that angels don't make you feel bad.
Tepid Waters chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I really liked this, especially the last few lines :)
Pocket Locket chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
The backstory on this was SUCH A BUZZ KILL i"m sorry but that is my biggest pet peeve in literature. If you hadn't explained it and just kept it abstract like that instead, a lot more people could relate to it. If the AN was so important at the beginning and the end post it in your profile or message it out to those who need to know. But about the poem and the crazy long notes (not trying to be mean but GAH!) I loved your poem! Get rid of the notes. The way you rhymed was great and it didn't make a difference how many times you rhymed Way and Stay because you made it flow and not sound choppy. Great job again. But next time.. take my advice on the notes. :)
The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
This is a good poem; filled with emotion(: I like it. But the wording is a little plain, but that's okay.

Awh, that's heartfelt(': You're one strong person and I respect you for that :)


- Aka The Loved And Unloved