Reviews for Black Knight
Y. S. Wong chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Brutal. Breaking out the gore in the first chapter, eh? If this is any indication of what's to come, should be interesting.

I'm not a present tense hater being that I write in it myself, but you do have a few tense consistency issues here and there. A few typos as well, but those aren't anything a good beta reader won't catch. Happy writing!