Reviews for Articulation
Wondering Jew chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Ooooooh (that's what my mouth did when I read this)
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I love this, especially the last sentence. Love's always burning and on fire, and now it's turning into smoke on your lips. Really interesting and clever way of writing it.
Shadowswept chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
This is a short but powerful poem. It's so true how hard it is to say those three words. I love the imagery you use in the last line about the fire of the words turning to smoke on your lips. Great job on this write!