|Reviews for Articulation|
| Wondering Jew chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Ooooooh (that's what my mouth did when I read this)
| tolerate chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I love this, especially the last sentence. Love's always burning and on fire, and now it's turning into smoke on your lips. Really interesting and clever way of writing it.
| Shadowswept chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
This is a short but powerful poem. It's so true how hard it is to say those three words. I love the imagery you use in the last line about the fire of the words turning to smoke on your lips. Great job on this write!