|Reviews for Courtship as a Foundation to make you Jealous|
| LuckycoolHawk9 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I liked the simile of the anvil cracking the circumstance because it shows how powerful the sound was, it brought out the youth and argument of the original relationship. I disliked the fact that both of them are believing something that is not true because it shows the fantasy and delusion too strongly and does not make their realtionship seem real and does not allow the reader to wonder how well the other relationship was. Still a great poem.