Reviews for Tinnitus
True Talker chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Reading this makes me sad.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I liked the idea behind this and you did it justice by telling it so well. It was so sad yet gentle. I loved the imagery of summer and spring and the way the seasons changing showed the changes. Great poem, as always.
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Whoa. This is one painfully sad poem. I love it. It's like this narrator reading and there are images of summer days and things like that, but they're slowly fading away and there is another scene of her walking towards the lights that I assume is death or moving on. Either way, this poem is really good. The italics made an impact too, in the variations of the reading pace and loudness of it as I read it. Great job!