Reviews for Summer Seas
CorycianAngel1944 chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Lady Inverness chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I like how you're setting everything up, it isn't too fast or too slow. You're also portraying the characters as what they are: normal teenagers. Too many authors don't do so, so I'm glad that you are doing it. However, I'm not a huge fan of how almost everything is mainly comprised of dialogue. Dialogue is good for conveying feelings and such, which you do well, but we need to know descriptions of places as well, along with some sequences that tell what the characters are doing. I also believe you could add a bit more detail; I can see that you've put some in, but I feel like a just a bit more would be perfect. Overall, this seems like a good start to your story. My main suggestions is to add more descriptions and a little less dialogue.
Skarloe chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
Very nice. Simple yet engaging - and i love the dialogue dominance, it makes for great pacing, and makes it easier to imagine what is going on!
AWhisperInTheShadows chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
So far it's really held my interest! I'm really looking forward to seeing how it plays out.