|Reviews for Masquerade|
| Spring Storm chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
I love this. It's very enchanting, and relatable despite it being fantasy. You've got some good phrases here like "joyful orange starlets" and "lunatic spectrum." I really enjoyed reading it.
One tiny criticism, though: "Moves" in "The heels and feet moves as one" should be "move." ;)