I love the allusions and the stanza that included "I'll marry the man who brings me sunflowers instead of roses." So creative! Though, who does Mars symbolize, if he does symbolize anything? Anyways, it looks great and sounds better when spoken aloud. It'd be awesome if performed too. :)

Wow. You've got an incredible sense of detail. Well written, I loved it.

This was a beautiful poem. A little sad but still beautiful. I loved every part and the emotions you covayed were so amazing :-) Another unbelievable poem!

Aw, this is sad. But I like it. Good job, it's lovely

Really deep and interesting and so well constructed. I absolutely loved it.

I LOVED THIS. Really. I thought it was absolutely beautiful.

Wow. This lovely, and I love the ending