Reviews for Earth
XDon'tEatTheCeleryX chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Nice. You've used imagery well and I like that it rhymes. The only thing I would say is that there are a few spelling mistakes: your should be you're and feilds should be fields. Other than that, well done!
cassidy.vink chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
i love it 3
hayDay chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
The truth, and only the truth, in your own way. I love it!
IdiehP chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I adore this! especially the 'Wash away that cloud' part