Reviews for Gift Wrapped
Tepid Waters chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
This was really surreal and original. I really enjoyed the imagery.
GuyBoyPerson chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Man, today has been a good day for fictionpress! What a wonderfully written, poetic sort of language you use to describe our lives, or I suppose it could be interpreted differently.
We're so complex as humans, yet so simple, the way God made us...so strange to understand. But we can let our hearts pour out to someone or another someday...the terror is if we give that box to someone who changes their minds...
Sorry, a little off-topic perhaps, good work. I don't think there were any mistakes in your writing, for this style, and I liked it. Haven't read much like this before.
inkfngrz chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Aw! Man, you make poetry seem so easy and full of heart.
Can't wait for more!
Write on!
Annarina chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Aww, I loved this! I love the balance between somberness and sweetness, it's lovely :) xx