Reviews for Bound, To, Past
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
A very sad yet beautiful poem! The rhyming and emotions were superb! Lovely job, keep it up :D
Key Atlas chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
I love how you made the lines short. It may be short, but it gets the point across, loud and clear. Great job!
ygg chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Very raw, dark and emotional. The apparent inevitability and despair is enhanced even more by the short size of each line and the overall poem. Powerful and tragic! Great job.