|Reviews for So Speaketh Snake|
| chris morris chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Good job on leaving the reveal until the last couple stanzas, I know you had religious diction all throughout, though for those of us who don't have a big vocabulary, the end is what really drove it home. Speaking of the diction, good job on that too, you kept the them and rhythm going all throughout.
My favorite line was 'stretch sincerity slowly,' I think it's a good summary of the problems plaguing Christianity today, hell this entire poem is a summary of that.
| Snazzilicious chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I know you say you hate writing poetry because you think you're bad at it...but you're not. So shut up. This was brilliant. The line "Self-righteous seers seeing squat." really made me laugh, which never happens when I read poetry. Really, I just have no idea how you managed to accomplish this at all. Go you!