Reviews for I Can't Take It
Freiheit98 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Very strong emotions are told in this poem. Wow...good job in conveying them in your writing. One itsy bitsy feed back...I feel it would be better if you didn't use 'shit' in one of your lines...it takes away from your writing. But otherwise I thought it was awesome! Good job! Keep it up! :D