|Reviews for Why Don't You Care?|
| Tepid Waters chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
I can relate to this so much. I especially love the last stanza.
| Eleantris chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Okay, I love this even more than the first one. This is *incredible*. It's so raw and hard-hitting. I love these lines especially -
'Perhaps you were deemed too fragile for such a volatile and cruel world
So they opened up your chest
Cut out your heart
Let your blood drip onto the crimson floor
Then they placed your battered heart in a jar labelled "safekeeping" and stored it high on a shelf'
The imagery in those lines is amazing, and the almost ironic tone just adds to it and yeah I just really love this. :)
| Annarina chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
I love the imagery you have used in this, especially in the fifth stanza, as well as the varying line length - it makes some of the lines seem more biting and others seem more frustrated. I also love the fact that it reads like it would make good song lyrics