|Reviews for the sound of being|
| tolerate chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
I like the rhythm of this poem. It flows well and has an unique feeling to it, like from line 4 to 6. The slight pause that resulted from the commas before/after 'solid' and 'pale' changed the pace of the poem from normal to fast. The words you've chosen were beautiful, especially the colors, such as eggshells and lead. Other words like tear holes and mechanical minds also generate a certain type of feeling and imagery. All in all, the poem was beautifully written and it was an enjoyable read.