|Reviews for White|
| lucia1156 chapter 1 . 5/3
Whoa, what a gread story I just read. I suggest you publish your book in NovelStar, a lot of readers will love your work.
| T.L. Chasse chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
Terrific chapter, Pan. I really do love your writing style. It's easy to read and there is such a sense of adventure. I got quite lost in your story this morning. :)
I really like Tesikas and Visai. Tesikas sees something great in his friend, and he's right there to help Sai stay strong. With war on the horizon and turmoil in the council, something Big is coming . . .
:D Keep it up - I look forward to the next chapter.
| T.L. Chasse chapter 2 . 3/13/2014
You're off to a great start here. I hope you write some more. I love your characters' names and you are doing a good job setting the scene.
It's sad that people are so afraid of someone who is different. They can miss out on knowing some really awesome people that way.
| iOc chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Another wonderful chapter, m'dear.
I love Tesikas and Visai's relationship. Outcasts should always have that one friend they can lean on, no matter what.
| iOc chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
:D Like you requested, m'dear.
This is an interesting concept. I can't wait to see what happens next.