Reviews for Jigsaw Wisdom
Art7Freak chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Wisdom and intelligence are two very different things. This is actually my new favorite piece by you. It's really, how do I put this, mature and bookish. That is to say, it reminds me of a book I once read, though the title is escaping me at the moment, or perhaps it was an excerpt, but either way, the way you wrote it and the way it flowed, combined with a good choice of words and a mature air made it really enjoyable. Well done :)
WritingWolf14 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
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CodeofSilence chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Really like the voice of the character, it is a casual and easy to relate to.
I noticed a couple of places such "take of him than anything else" where I assume you missed the word 'care'.
There is a lot of truth to the words and I am impressed by how even within the relatively short length of the piece you managed to clearly show the growth in the main character's viewpoint.
All in all it flowed very nicely and was a pleasant read! :)