Reviews for Cnidarian Lover
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
The way you used, nematocyst, is strange and hard to decipher the kind of laugh Tomás does "–I remark with a nematocyst-laced laugh".
I'm assuming his laugh is harsh or mean due to what nematocyst are but placing it in this context just doesn't seem right.
LightXDarkness chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
Ah huh! The drama has begun! In a way, i feel so sorry for our two main characters. They have gone through painful emotions and are just barely holding on. Really great chapters :3
LightXDarkness chapter 4 . 8/10/2013
I am absolutely captivated by your story. So far, its been a really great ride. I like all the of the turns in this story and I just love this story in general. Well off to the next chapter I shall go! _
Sempai Has Noticed You Today chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
Omg, yes! I love it! Please keep writing this story. Honestly, this story just made my day! :)
Sempai Has Noticed You Today chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Yes, this is so good! Looking forward to the next one!