Reviews for Cleansing
EC18 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Overall, I love your story! I felt the emotions behind this story. Now for some tips! I believe you can make it a lot better! I say revise it a bit before you decided to publish it! :) I hope I don't sound harsh! haha! I'm no expert in this kind of thing, but as I read your story I thought about different ways to improve. :) Continue writing! And keep up the good work! .