Reviews for The day
I Am Tymi chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I like what you've got here. But instead of telling your audience, try to show them how you feel.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
That's really cute
TheSilentRose chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Found it! I really liked what you did with the flow an the words in this poem. Awesome job! :)