Reviews for The Band Of Popularity
afern36 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Overall, this was a great story. The characters were believable as was motivation. Most people do just want to fit in, but sometimes they hurt others in the process. My biggest gripe with this was how the characters were described physically. It is a common mistake among new authors, and one even experienced ones must keep in mind, you must show, not tell. Never have a character describe themselves, do it through motions. Such as, she reached up and scratched her golden blond hair. Describing through actions. Other than that, this was a very good story.
R.K. Iris chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
That was really nicely written...I really like your writing style. The beginning was a bit off for me, but it picked up three paragraphs later, and it went on really well. I can't say I'm a really big fan of the content, but you made it a very interesting read. - . I'm eagerly awaiting more of your work!

R. K. Iris.