|Reviews for What Makes Me Shine?|
| ThinkPi chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I really loved this one! I loved the first four lines the most, superb introduction. You have a way with imagery, a quirk I adore (I love personifying my environment). What did strike me differently is how I expected this poem to a lot more complex after having read the first four lines. By the end of the poem it instead resonated as just the right amount of straightforwardness and depth.
Small errors I found are "to well" should be "too well." You added an extra "the" in "I look at how the star shines bright." I really enjoyed the rhythm employed by the way, it was easy to read it aloud in my head. :)