|Reviews for The Unpredictable Bedtime Story|
| Lolitroy chapter 7 . 8/8/2013
Now I liked both the kids and the other characters, especially Willy, just because ;)
Don't kill anyoneeee!
BTW this is my last review T-T sorry, 'll come some other day ;)
| Lolitroy chapter 6 . 8/8/2013
You won't believe this, but I'm dying to see what happens -w-
I love your chapter names!
| Lolitroy chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
I've noticed this is sort of a self-therapy. It's awesome, because I kind of get ticked off by cliches as well... (says one whose story has 'cliche' on the summary).
And I grew attached to them back in chapter 1, so...
That means you're enjoying the story a lot!
| Lolitroy chapter 4 . 8/8/2013
Hahaha, ahhh, this never fails to make me laugh ;)
| Lolitroy chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
Hahaha, Alexander the Good -w-' this chapter was funny!
BTW I'm not gonna be able to review everything in time -w-' but I'll reach as much as I can (*v*)b
| Lolitroy chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
For some reason this reminds me of that movie... um... don't remember the name, all I know is Adam Sandler appears -w-'
It also reminds me one A Thousand and One Nights!
End of the rant.
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Sounds like a sweet storyteller ;)
I found myself liking the kids! And Shanna as well :D looking forward to read more wacky stories :)
BTW if you're looking for a new Title I think yours is okay... maybe Bedtime Stories or something... dunno...
Anyway, keep it up!
P.S. You're my 2,500th reviewwwww so just because I'll review all the other chapters, mwahaha!
| 3mee guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
This. Is. Just. AWESOME!
Anyways, I couldn't quite understand the poem. Refrigerators?
| Sareti chapter 16 . 6/24/2013
I love it!
Thanks so much for writing it!
| ironsharpensiron27 chapter 16 . 6/21/2013
Sorry there is no sequel...but I am creating a series with sort of the same premise where the Author interacts with the characters, and it will be unpredictable, but sorry the cliché battle is over :'(
| DevilishET chapter 16 . 6/21/2013
xD lol is there a book 2? haha
| inkfngrz chapter 16 . 6/21/2013
Farewell, the battle of the clichés is over, and the clichés are screaming for their refrigerator in terror! (Wait a second, how'd a refrigerator get in there? *shrugs* Oh well. You get the point.)
Please, please, please! You gotta make a second!
| inkfngrz chapter 14 . 6/20/2013
OK, you have a great story. (Take a peek at my profile and you'll see why.) Cliches beware, the Unpredictable Bedtime Story's on the loose!
Totally giggled when you got to Lulu. She's exactly how I wouldn't have imagined a scientist. Perfect.
| inkfngrz chapter 12 . 6/19/2013
I actually loved your superheroes. Especially Pointless. She's got great sarcasm. XD
I would want to be a telepath. That would be so much fun.
So long as I can keep my hair.
| chexmixbaby44 chapter 12 . 6/14/2013
That was hilarious! (And of course you would want telekinesis) I'd probably want speed, even though I don't run. There'd finally be a reason to, and I'd get around faster!