Reviews for The Train Station
Jessdance34 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
I like how you wrote this story. You made yourself the story teller instead of putting on the persona of your mother. I feel as if that is a wise choice to do so. It made it more real for the readers that there are gaps and such in the story and we don't know absolutely every single detail because you weren't actually there, and I like how you did that.

Keep writing you have a lot of talent!
afern36 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Interesting story! Certainly something to warm that entertains.
hannabanana847 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I really like how your story flows and progresses, it very natural! Thank you for commenting on my "story" it's the first thing I have tried to write!
R.K. Iris chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This is really sweet...I didn't stop smiling the entire time I read this... - . I really found this sweet, uncomplicated and the kind of story mothers or grandmothers tell children on a cold winter evening either in the kitchen or in their room, just to entertain their children. It's really amazing. I loved reading this.

R. K. Iris.